Monday, May 24, 2010

Narrative poetry



over the rainbow<3

were the rain always die's

were their is only happyness

their is no sarrow or pain

only the dreams of people going through the sky

the thing that makes everything ok

the thing that after a horrible rainstorm

the sky brighten,the clouds clear,the sun shines

AND THE RAINBOW COMES OUT TO GIVE POPLE HOPE AND DREAMS WERE THAT WONDERFUL POT OF GOLD IS SAID TO BE

Friday, May 21, 2010

"The Raven"


Then meaning of "The Raven" is sarrow and sadness he is upset because he cared about a women and he had diead and this bird came and became to mock him but in realitly it was jsut him being sad.he feels scared and he looks to his books for comfort and he doesnt find it all he finds is sarrow he becomes scared and tells himself it is just someone tapping knocking but it wasnt it was the darkness scaring him.



The poeam has and internal ryhm scheme.he uses alot of iliteration.


The setting of this poeam is in the man house and it must have been a dark and down day with lots of wind that made things move and scare him.

Thursday, May 20, 2010

limericks

Their was this little blue dog by the sea
he was very blue
he had no friends to share the sea
he had many hopes and dreams to fill
yet no one to share them with
he saw a a very pink dog
with the fur of a rose
and as sweet as honey
he finally found a dog to share his sea with
his hopes, and his dreams
the sea has found the dog to share with
the little blue dog is not blue no more

The light of the stars is in your heart
The flames burn as you look up and smile
The stars shine bright as the fire bruns out
The light shines so bright in your eyes
that it makes me reach out and touch your heart
even in the pitch BLACK your heart shines in a million colors!!!!!!!!

Wednesday, May 19, 2010

my favorite poem

A stranger you were once.
Then, with a gentle look you took my hand.
As our lives engaged,you lit my life and I held both your hands.
Now that decades have passed,ours souls have indeed become one.
How fortunate we are that we have found the love so truethat everyone dreams about.
- Laura Veronica Merodio -

yessi

I love this poeam because it shows how time passes by and even though time has passed you are still with this person and that you love them alot. It helps you see that even through time their will always be a person thats loves you and that is willing to be with you no matter what happens and what life throws at you.

I can relate to this poem because i have had this happen to be and you always want to be with this person and u never want to be apart form them. they are always with you and i know how it feels to love someone and feel like you are so close and that person knows how to give you hope and keep your dreams alive.
-jampier y yessi-

Friday, May 14, 2010

Holocaust Bio

Yona
poor, happy ,determined, loving
Pabianice,Poland
Lover of sisters,friends,parents
Who feels sadness, scared, without any hope
Who gives her time, he hopes,her fears
Who fears the comander, to die, to lose everything she has
Who Experienced working, suffering, fear
Who after the Holocaust she was in the consentration camp for 10 days with little food and water she was liberated and she joined her uncle and lived in the americas.
Dickmann

Thursday, May 13, 2010

Mother to son by Langston Hughes

1) Its about never giving up even though the road is hard.

2)that life is not a crystal stair and that you should always keep going.

3)she wants him to see that the life she has lived is not easy and that even though their might be struggles that he should always keep going.

4) to metaphore would be tracks and spliters because they both hurt one way or another .

Metaphor

i would comapre the morning to the sea

it changes everyday

it can be happy and flowes

or it can be angry and rough

just like the sea their are many things that can happen

where you choice to be and what to do

it can be clod and a cold shoulder

or

it can be sweet as sheet as a pie

but it writes its own destiney

it can make it own way through the good and the bad

but we decide to go with the current

or to resist it



Tuesday, May 11, 2010

how you feel about poetry

I think poetry is a way for people to find themselfs . poetry can also be a way for people to express what they feel and what they think without going into so much detail.
Poetry can a way to dive into another world were you and you alone are writing the story and no one can tell you what to be or how to do things.
In poetry people find themselves without knowing they find the person they have always wanted to be and they finally find it through poerty .